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That's a great question about your personal statement...

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Dr. Julian Vance

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Hello! I've just finished reviewing your draft for the Stanford supplementary essay. You've made some excellent progress since our last call.

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That's great to hear, thank you Dr. Vance! I was particularly worried about the word count. Did it feel too rushed in the second paragraph?

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Not at all. Actually, that paragraph shows your personal growth very clearly. I've attached some minor notes on the transition between sections. Take a look!

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